Nothing new

You've already done this one. Remember the Corrupted Matrimony? It's way better and darker than this one. But still this one has it's charms in being the more battle-oriented Matrimony in compare to the much more darker and slow (yet it also sounds very battle-like to me)

It has some promise

The melody starts rather orkish than elvish. Try to add some chimes in it so that it's more like magical. Elves are magical after all. That woodwind instrument (flute I suppose) fits perfectly. You just have to find something better than soundfonts (as I hear you use exactly soundfont which sounds too flat). Anyway. I won't vote yet as I expect you to alter your song for the best of it when I could vote for a full score.

Best regards.

Awesome! (as always)

You are the man! Defenitely this is one of the best rock instrumentals ever heard. Yeah! Actually I like the piano most. I think it's esential for the musical piece (either it's some sort of electrical synth or just plain piano).
The only thing you should think about is if you can sing such energetic pieces and becoming total favorite. (just thought about it right now)